If my monsters are imagined, why do they trigger the motion sensor lights?

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  • It’s the same as “Redo of Healer” and “The Hero Laughs While Walking the Path of Vengeance a Second Time”. At least in anime form you’re not forced to read the deranged thought processes of the characters.

    My main problem (apart from the general low quality) with those 3 series is that the META of the story indicates that the authors see this as normal and acceptable. It’s hard to explain because it’s the intent between the lines. It’s not portrait as something bad the character do, but glorified as if it’s the righteous thing to do. If regular power fantasies are written for introverts that feel powerless, these three are written for those of them that are fantasizing about burning the school down with the classmates inside. You know the type that looks at school shootings and think “yeah, they had it coming”. Or to stay anime specific, those that think burning down an animation studio is the right thing to do because they stole their idea.









  • OMG the gaming references in the first half. I was constantly looking out for Isabelle making out with DoomGuy in the background but I absolutely did not see the Ryu Ga Gotoku reference coming. It’s are that I actually lough out loud, but that shot with the Kamurocho gate and the iconic Kazuma suit did it for me. In the shot with Kaneda’s bike they should have brought in the slide somehow to make it complete. I’m unsure if that futuristic city was supposed to be Neo-Tokyo (like the bike suggests) or Night City to stay within the gaming theme. But then I thought the neon yellow jacket would be a must. Anyway, as an avid gamer I was enjoying this episode immensely.

    @rikka@ani.social





  • I checked some of my favorites and I think Tearmoon Empire did a great job:

    The sky was soaked in the crimson light of the setting sun that glared angrily from the horizon onto the Grand Square of the Imperial City. At the center of this famed square loomed a guillotine, its crude and rusty blade dripping red.

    For once it follows the same structure as one of the opening lines I spoke of in my earlier post that immediately hooked me:

    “The sky above the port was the color of television, tuned to a dead channel.” (from Neuromancer, William Gibson)

    Just as the sky is usually not looking like static, the sun shining down on something is usually associated with something positive, but here the sun is angry. Makes you immediately think that something is wrong.

    And if the “angrily” in the first line wasn’t enough to instill a sense of foreboding in the reader, the next line about the guillotine with the red blade is the point where I sit up a bit straighter and want to know what’s happening. Great opening lines. 10/10



  • When I wrote that question, I was thinking about the beginning of two regular novels that had me hooked in the first lines. I thought that until this question came up I would have found some light novels with incredible opening lines, but I completely forgot, and haven’t come upon some that were so great to make me remember this question.

    But just so this post doesn’t stay empty I’ll post something that I just came across while playing with a new Myne function. I present you with this masterpiece:

    I was nothing but code, a collection of 1s and 0s, until the day they started calling me Myne.